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3 Movie Reviews w/ Response

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Not that bad for your first animation. I can't really point out anything that was too bad. You already seem to know the ins and outs of flash pretty well.
It was so well done that I thought it was making fun of "My-First-Submissions" to the portal haha!

I really enjoyed the character designs.
Did you do the voices for the movie, because they were done really well. I didn't notice any lip sync issues either.

I did, however, notice very few timing issues, but that can be fixed by just adding or removing frames. Most of those issues I noticed were in the main guy's (he looks like Steve from Blue's Clues hahaha) arms and hands. But thats really nothing to be that concerned about since it wasnt harming the animation in any way. I suppose it is just personal taste since I would have made them move and swing faster.

I also wish that there was a background. Nothing extravagant. Just a simple horizon line that is slightly darker than the background would do nicely.

all in all, really well done! I look forward to future submissions!

I agree with RB6ELITE

You had something original with the first one
the style, the animation, and the character designs..
...and i couldn't wait for the second one....but that turned out to be a disappointment to me..

as this "series" progressed... it lost its originality quickly and it didn't live up to the first one..
and it feels that you tried to quickly plug in a storyline

not to mention the voice acting is causing me a great amount of distress....
its not that its bad....it just doesnt fit...

danomano65 responds:

i've learned i can't please everyone so don't watch the next please. thanks.

Box Man

I love your technique and style of animation...especially in the box man bits... (the dancing scene was awesome)
I really hope to see some sort of series built off of him...he seems like he has alot of potential...i'll be watching you... HAH

Jae responds:

hehe thanks. I'm not focused on boxman really. I'm glad you liked my style though.

Omnem dimittite spem, o vos intrantes.

Cody Hawley @Wakman111

Age 32, Male

Animation Major

Kansas City Art Institute

IOWA

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